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Listen to the Reed Song

  • Writer: davidsmith208
    davidsmith208
  • 5 days ago
  • 2 min read

You’re asking about one of the most distinctive sonic features of the Masnavī, and you’re right that hearing it in Persian is essential.





1. What meter is the Masnavī in?



The Masnavī-ye Maʿnavī of Jalal al-Din Rumi is written almost entirely in the Arabic–Persian quantitative meter:



Ramal-e musaddas-e maḥdhūf



رَمَلِ مُسَدَّسِ مَحْذوف



Its formal pattern



In classical prosody (ʿarūḍ):


فَاعِلاتُن / فَاعِلاتُن / فَاعِلُن

fāʿilātun / fāʿilātun / fāʿilun



Your intuitive rhythm is very good:



dum–da–dum–dum / dum–da–dum–dum / dum–da–dum


This meter is:


  • Flowing

  • Wave-like

  • Ideal for oral recitation

  • Naturally suited to didactic narrative and trance-like repetition



That is exactly why Rumi chose it for a 25,000+ verse spiritual teaching poem.





2. Why Ramal is perfect for the Masnavī



Ramal has:


  • A gentle forward sway (often described as “walking” or “breathing”)

  • No harsh stops

  • A hypnotic cadence that supports samāʿ (listening as spiritual practice)



Rumi dictated the Masnavī aloud; this meter carries speech naturally, almost like heightened conversation.





3. Other major poets who used this meter



Ramal was well established before Rumi, but he made it spiritually iconic.


Notable users:


  • Sanai – especially Ḥadīqat al-Ḥaqīqa

  • Attar of Nishapur – narrative and mystical works

  • Jami

  • Nizami Ganjavi – for narrative masnavīs



Rumi inherited this tradition—but expanded it into an ecstatic, improvisatory instrument.





4. “One must listen in Persian” — why this is true



Persian quantitative meter works through:


  • Vowel length

  • Stress through duration, not accent

  • Sound symbolism (long ā, ī, ū creating emotional space)



No English translation can preserve:


  • The temporal swing

  • The subtle rhyme echo at each couplet end

  • The breath-based phrasing



Even understanding nothing of Persian, listeners often feel the pull.





5. Where to listen with Persian + English together (best options)




⭐ Best scholarly + audible experience




Nicholson Masnavi Online



  • Persian text (critical)

  • English translation (E. H. Nicholson)

  • Audio recitation available for selected passages

  • Excellent for the Reed Song (opening lines)






⭐ Best living oral tradition style




Shahram Nazeri



  • Sung/recited Masnavī passages

  • Deep rhythmic embodiment of Ramal

  • YouTube recordings often show Persian verses onscreen






⭐ Clear spoken Persian with text




Hossein Alizadeh



  • Musical settings of Masnavī lines

  • Ideal for hearing meter clearly






⭐ Practical modern option (very effective)



On YouTube, search:


Masnavi ney nama Persian English


Look for videos that show:


  • Persian text line by line

  • English subtitle below

  • Slow, measured recitation






6. The opening line (Reed Song) — meter in action



Persian

بشنو از نی چون حکایت می‌کند

از جدایی‌ها شکایت می‌کند


Scansion (simplified)

fa-ʿi-lā-tun | fa-ʿi-lā-tun | fa-ʿi-lun


When heard aloud, the meter teaches itself.





7. How to listen (important)



When you listen:


  1. Ignore meaning first

  2. Feel the three-beat wave

  3. Notice how each couplet settles at the rhyme

  4. Only then read the translation



This is how the Masnavī was meant to enter the heart.




If you want, I can:


  • Scan the first 2–3 lines rhythmically for you

  • Recommend the single best recording of the Reed Song

  • Explain how Ramal differs from hazaj (used in ghazals)

  • Show how the meter mirrors breath and remembrance (dhikr)



Just tell me which you’d like next.

 
 
 

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